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Conundrum
it’s so quiet
i could hear
a pin
drop
if i
weren’t
on pins
and needles
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Question: Did you think of having a final line of 4 syllables? (I’m a pattern freak, so I’m noticing that there is an incomplete pattern. Was that intentional?)
yeah, i left it incomplete on purpose. i thought it added a bit of tension. what do you think? is it just dumb?